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2017-09-19 · 첨삭 강사 Kathy

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Hi there, Kathy! Write about a difficult decision you had to make. First, it's difficult for me to decide lunch menu. Second, it's difficult for me to decide whether i run with my nieces. Because after that happened, i'm very tired. Third, it's difficult for me to decide whether I get up when alarm rings that's why i want to sleep more. There is nothing more to think about that. ^

강사 첨삭

Good Day!

Thank you so much for submitting your composition today. It is my pleasure reading it and correcting it as well. I do believe you are a very intelligent student and you will be able to learn English as long as you persevere and have more patience. Do not worry, I am always here to help you improve your English and I will be very happy to help you further with your journey in learning the English language.

~~Teacher Kathy! ^^

Hi there, Kathy!

Write about a difficult decision you had to make.

First, it\'s difficult for me to decide lunch menu.

>> First, it\'s difficult for me to decide what will I have for my lunch.

>> First, it\'s difficult for me to decide what dish will I have for lunch.
Second, it\'s difficult for me to decide whether i run with my nieces. Because after that happened, i\'m very tired.

>> Second, it\'s difficult for me to decide whether should play and run with my nieces because that will be very tiring.
Third, it\'s difficult for me to decide whether I get up when alarm rings that\'s why i want to sleep more.

>> Third, it\'s difficult for me to decide whether I should get up when my alarm rings and if I did, I will not be able to go back to sleep.
There is nothing more to think about that. ^^

>> I can\'t think of anything else.

>> I can\'t think of anything else though.

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