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Writing task: What makes a good teacher? Please answer in no more than FIVE (5) sentences.
The laugh makes a good teachers.
It is an important to make a happy classroom.
Most good teacher has a lots of laugh.
So,I like them very much.
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Hi [이름]!^^
Thank you for sharing your thoughts about a good teacher. Let\'s enjoy our classes and be happy always!
Have a good day!
Writing task: What makes a good teacher? Please answer in no more than FIVE (5) sentences.
The laugh makes a good teachers.
>> For me, a teacher who laughs is a good teacher.
It is an important to make a happy classroom.
>> It is important to create a happy atmosphere in the classroom.
Most good teacher has a lots of laugh.
>> Most good teachers laugh a lot.
So, I like them very much.
>> Correct.
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