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Hi [이름]!
Bless your good heart for reaching out those who are in need.
At such a young age, you already have a deeper meaning of what can make a person\'s life worthy.
Keep it up!
~T. Kelly
What are the things that make your life worth living? Answer in no more than FIVE (5) sentences
To make my life worthly,I should have the money.
>> To make my life worth living I should have the money.
I can buy expensive things to earn money.
>> I can buy expensive things if I have money.
I also donate for poor people.
>> I can also donate to poor people.
And,I should have the jewely or gold.
>> Having jewelries and gold can make my life worth living as well.
And, I will so happy.
>> Those things will make me happy.
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