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HOMEWORK: Have you ever been a guest at a surprise party?
I don\'t experienced about that because almost guests aren\'t came into my house.
Usually we have been met outside or food store.
If i have a chance, i will hope to inviting my guest into my house.
If that day is guest birthday, all of us can make some delicious food and cake and want to do enjoying great time.
I saw this surprise party many times from watching drama and movie.
They look like happy and smile and spending a good time with their family.
Next time, i will planning to surprise party with my friends.
If one of my friends is birthday, before he come in home, We will be ready every events for him.
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Usually we have been met outside or food store.
If i have a chance, i will hope to inviting my guest into my house.
If that day is guest birthday, all of us can make some delicious food and cake and want to do enjoying great time.
I saw this surprise party many times from watching drama and movie.
They look like happy and smile and spending a good time with their family.
Next time, i will planning to surprise party with my friends.
If one of my friends is birthday, before he come in home, We will be ready every events for him.
I don\'t experienced about that because almost guests aren\'t came into my house.
>>I haven\'t experienced that one before because I haven\'t invited some guests into my house.
Usually we have been met outside or food store.
>>Usually we meet outside or in a food store.
If i have a chance, i will hope to inviting my guest into my house.
>>If I have a chance, I hope that I can invite some guests into my house.
If that day is guest birthday, all of us can make some delicious food and cake and want to do enjoying great time.
>>If it is my guest\'s birthday, all of us can make some delicious food and cake. We will have a great time.
I saw this surprise party many times from watching drama and movie.
>>I saw some surprise parties before from watching dramas and movies.
They look like happy and smile and spending a good time with their family.
>>They are happy and they are smiling. They had a good time with their family.
Next time, i will planning to surprise party with my friends.
>>Next time, I will plan a surprise party with my friends.
If one of my friends is birthday, before he come in home, We will be ready every events for him.
>>If one of my friends will have his/her birthday, before he/she come in his/her home, We will be ready for the event.
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