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There are many Benefits of having friends.
First, When I have dufficulty likes borrowing money, I can ask them to help me.
Second, I can tell them my worries, which cab be shameful to tell other people.
Third, A time with my friends makes me unwind
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Good evening, [이름].
Thank you so much for this. :)
Have a good weekend!
- T. Rina
1. There are many Benefits of having friends.
>> CORRECT!
2. First, When I have dufficulty likes borrowing money, I can ask them to help me.
>> First, when I have difficulties like financial problems, I can ask my friends to lend me some money.
3. Second, I can tell them my worries, which cab be shameful to tell other people.
>> CORRECT!
>> CORRECT!
2. First, When I have dufficulty likes borrowing money, I can ask them to help me.
>> First, when I have difficulties like financial problems, I can ask my friends to lend me some money.
3. Second, I can tell them my worries, which cab be shameful to tell other people.
>> CORRECT!
spelling: cab->can
4. Third, A time with my friends makes me unwind
4. Third, A time with my friends makes me unwind
>> CORRECT!
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