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HELLO [이름],

Thank you for doing your homework.

Thank you for giving me some tips on how to stay awake in the office. kkk 

Teacher Sophia

Here are your corrections:

When working in the office, being sleepy is a common and serious problem.

>> CORRECT 

Especially after eating lunch, many workers feel sleepy, and some people are sometimes berated due to his sleepiness in meeting time.

>>  Many workers feel sleepy especially after eating lunch and some people are sometimes berated due to sleepiness during meetings.

So I give you some tips to dispel a sleepiness.

>> So, I will give you some tips to dispel your sleepiness in the office.
First, chewing gum is very helpful way to keep awake.

>> First, chewing a gum is a helpful way to keep awake.

A chewing activity activate your brain, and then your brain feel less sleepy.

>> The chewing activity activates your brain and you won\'t feel sleepy. 

If you chew a spicy flavor gum, it more helpful.

>> If you chew a spicy flavored gum then it will be more helpful.
Second, drinking coffee can make you active.

>> Second, drinking coffee will also make you active.

Caffeines in the coffee make you exited by inciting your nerves.

>> Caffeine in the coffee makes you excited and incite your nerves.

Strong coffee is more effective than average coffee.

>> Black coffee is more effective than average coffee.
Third, breathing deeply and rapidly is a good way to wake.

>> Third, breathing deeply and rapidly is a good way to stay awake.

In order to dispel your sleepiness, you should breathe much fresh air to supply this air to you brain.

>> In order to dispel your sleepiness, you should breath more fresh air to supply air to your brai.

After breathing intentionally, you can feel fresh, and your mental is clean.

>> After breathing deeply, you\'ll feel fresh mentally.  
However, the best way is taking enough sleep last night.

>> However, the best way is taking enough sleep a night before.