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Yes, Sir!
Most of my students take a time off to go to Australia, or to study here in our country~
I did not know that until I started teaching Koreans :)
I love this, Sir:
\"Contrarily, it might be saving more than 10 years. \"
Sometimes we rush ourselves, making decisions without thinking about it~
I think a year is enough to figure out what we want^^
See you tomorrow, General!^^
I didn\'t know that having a year off before starting universities is becoming increasingly common.
>>CORRECT!
I think it is a far cry from studying one more year to enter universities.
>>CORRECT!
Let\'s think over the trend negatively.
>> Let\'s think the trend over negatively.
Regardless of your intent or will, you could fall into evil ways by inappropriate relationship with new friends and the existing full-fledged members of society.
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Meanwhile, if we consider the trend positively, there seem to be more benefits in it.
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First of all, you could have the precious opportunities of actual, social experience while doing several part-time jobs and traveling abroad.
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What\'s more, you could perfectly prepare for the next university life on how to study, how to work and how to pay the tuition fees.
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Lastly, you could envision your better future life with sufficient time, raising your real capabilities to make it come true.
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Given the extension of our lifespan, delaying a year is not a big deal for our whole life.
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Contrarily, it might be saving more than 10 years.
>>CORRECT!
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