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2017-01-16 · 첨삭 강사 Rose

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I did't know that having a year off before starting universities is becoming increasingly common. I think it is a far cry from studying one more year to enter universities. Let's think over the trend negatively. Regardless of your intent or will, you could fall into evil ways by inappropriate relationship with new friends and the existing full-fledged members of society. Meanwhile, if we consider the trend positively, there seem to be more benefits in it. First of all, you could have the precious opportunities of actual, social experience while doing several part-time jobs and traveling abroad. What's more, you could perfectly prepare for the next university life on how to study, how to work and how to pay the tuition fees. Lastly, you could envision your better future life with sufficient time, raising your real capabilities to make it come true. Given the extension of our lifespan, delaying a year is not a big deal for our whole life. Contrarily, it might be saving more than 10 years.

강사 첨삭

 Yes, Sir!

Most of my students take a time off to go to Australia, or to study here in our country~

I did not know that until I started teaching Koreans :)

I love this, Sir:

\"Contrarily, it might be saving more than 10 years. \"

Sometimes we rush ourselves, making decisions without thinking about it~

I think a year is enough to figure out what we want^^

See you tomorrow, General!^^

I didn\'t know that having a year off before starting universities is becoming increasingly common.

>>CORRECT!
 I think it is a far cry from studying one more year to enter universities.

>>CORRECT!
 Let\'s think over the trend negatively.

>> Let\'s think the trend over negatively.
 Regardless of your intent or will, you could fall into evil ways by inappropriate relationship with new friends and the existing full-fledged members of society.

>>CORRECT!
 Meanwhile, if we consider the trend positively, there seem to be more benefits in it.

>>CORRECT!
 First of all, you could have the precious opportunities of actual, social experience while doing several part-time jobs and traveling abroad.

>>CORRECT!
 What\'s more, you could perfectly prepare for the next university life on how to study, how to work and how to pay the tuition fees.

>>CORRECT!
 Lastly, you could envision your better future life with sufficient time, raising your real capabilities to make it come true.

>>CORRECT!
 Given the extension of our lifespan, delaying a year is not a big deal for our whole life. 

>>CORRECT!
 Contrarily, it might be saving more than 10 years.

>>CORRECT!

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