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~~Teacher Kate

1. There are so many things to do on Portal site called Naver to the extent that finding \"something we cannot\" is hard
>>CORRECT!

>>Naver can help us with a lot of things and you can almost search for anything on this site.
2. To explain some of those things, I will tell you the things that I did using Naver recently.

>>CORRECT!

>>OR: To make my point clear, I will enumerate the things I did using Naver recently.
3. Firstly, I made a reservation of airline and accommodations through Naver to prepare the trip.

>>First, I made airline and accommodation reservations through Naver to prepare for the trip. 
4. I also searched the reviews of accommodation to find competent place through Naver.
>>Through Naver, I also searched for reviews on accommodations to find a good place to stay in.
5. Secondly, I used Naver when I want to go to somewhere by bus.
>>CORRECT!

>>OR: Also, I use Naver for commuting.
6. If I search the bus what I will take, I can get information about the current location of it.
>>If I search for the bus I\'ll take, I can get information on its current location. 
7. Thanks to this function, we can expect when the buses are arrive, so we don\'t have to wait for a bus in cold weather for a long time.

>>CORRECT!

>>or: Using this function is very convenient so that we won\'t have to wait for buses especially in harsh weather conditions.
8. So, I think the Naver is good Portal site that makes people comfortable.

>>So, I think Naver is a helpful site that helps people do things more comfortably.

>>OR: Consequently, I think Naver is a helpful site for people.