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Fantastic evening Hwa Shin! ^^

It\'s Friday again^^ thank you for sharing your thoughts about how you

control your anger. It is indeed true that time would be of great help to

control your anger. It will help you avoid doing things that we shouldn\'t do when we are angry.

Good job! ^^

Teacher Glenda^^

Here are my corrections:

Essay: How do you control your anger?

I have no special decided method for control of my anger.

>> I have no special way to control my anger.
 Sometimes I cry, sometimes I chat with the same mind, sometimes I become silent,
sometimes I image a plot for revenge in my mind.

>> Sometimes I cry, sometimes I chat with myself or I become silent and
sometimes I imagine a plot for revenge in my mind.

 But most of all I depend on time.

>> Correct

or

>> But most of the time, I depend on time.
 After the time is past somewhat I feel calm down.

>> After some time has past, I somewhat feel calm.
 Time resolves everything.

>> Correct