Homework - 07242018

There are several Korean culture that I am proud of, such as Hanbok, Kimchi and Taekwondo.

>> There are several parts of Korean culture that I\'m proud of, such as Hanbok, Kimchi and Taekwondo.

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>> There are many things about our Korean culture that I\'m proud of, such as Hanbok, Kimchi and Taekwondo.

It is hard for me to tell just one because above all three things has a lot of meanings to most Koreans.

>> It is hard for me to tell just one because all those three things have a lot of meaning to most Koreans. 

or

>> It is hard for me to choose just one because all those three things have a lot of meaning to most Koreans.
 Firtstly, Hanbok is the name of attire culture. It has different shape for women and men as well as different colors.

>> Firstly, Hanbok is the name of our cultural attire/traditional attire. It has different shapes for women and men as well as different colors.

Usually, vivid and beautiful colors is used for women\'s hanbok, but dark color is used for men\'s hanbok.

>> Correct
 Sencondly, Kimchi is the name of food. It is our own food and healthy food.

>> Secondly, Kimchi is one of our traditional food. It is one of our own and a very health food.

Kimchi is always on the table whenever Koreans have breakfast, lunch and supper.

>>  Correct

Cabbage and hot pepper powder are main ingredients for Kimchi.

>> Cabbage and hot pepper powder are the main ingredients for Kimchi.

Flavor of Kimchi is usually spicy, but there is a kind of Kimch that is not spicy, called White Kimchi.

>> The flavor of Kimchi is usually spicy, but there is a kind of Kimch that is not spicy, called White Kimchi.
 Lastly, Taekwondo is the name of our traditional sports. To have competition, two people are needed.

>> Correct

Similarly, it is fighting between two competitors. When one competitor is out of line, opposite competitor can get a score.

>> Correct