homework - 10
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello Ms. [이름],
Thank you for sharing to me about your day. It must be really hot in Korea because most students are complaining about the weather. Anyway, take care of yourself so that you will not get sick due to the high temperature. By the way, good job Ms. [이름]! Your sentences are well-made. See you tomorrow!
Take care!
~T. Lynn
I have no idea today\'s homework.
>>I have no idea on today\'s homework.
So I tell you about my day.
>>So I will tell you about my day.
I stay at home all day because it is very hot.
>>I stayed at home all day because it is very hot.
I need cool air with my family.
>>correct!
So I can\'t take on an air conditioner so I can economize electricity.
>>But I can\'t turn on the air conditioner because I want to save electricity.
In the evening, my family decide that I am going to watch a movie called Train to Busan with my family.
>>In the evening, my family decided to watch the movie Train to Busan.
There is very cool.
>>It\'s very cool there.
This vacation, I spend a lot of money for staying home because I don\'t cook at home this vacation because of high temperatures.
>>This vacation, I spent a lot of money staying home because I don\'t cook at home because of the high temperature.
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.