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2016-07-20 · 첨삭 강사 Lynn

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I have seen a movie entitled "About Time." The main character can travel in time. So he wants to change his childhood but he doesn't change it. He learned in time that present is the best present. So I don't want to journey back in time.

강사 첨삭

Hello Ms. [이름],

Thank you for making your homework. I believe that if we are able to change the past, the present and the future will also change thus we will not be that same person. See you tomorrow!

Take care!

~T. Lynn


I have seen a movie entitled \"About Time.\"

>>correct!
The main character can travel in time.

>>correct!
So he wants to change his childhood but he doesn\'t change it.

>>So he wants to change his childhood but he didn\'t change it.
He learned in time that present is the best present.

>>correct!
So I don\'t want to journey back in time.

>>correct!

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