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2016-07-20 · 첨삭 강사 Lynn

학생이 쓴 원문

I don't have many friends but I think age is not important in a friendship. I want to have kind of many differnet friends. But it is not easy to have because many korean adult think age important in a friendship like me. I want to change my thinking but it is not easy too.

강사 첨삭

Hello Ms. [이름],
We are friends even if we are not the same age. As is with love, age does not matter in friendship. But I guess there might be some adjustments to be made if your friend is older or younger than you because of generation gap. See you!
Take care!
~T. Lynn

I don\'t have many friends but I think age is not important in friendship.
>>correct!
I want to have kind of many differnet friends.
>>I want to have many different kinds of friends.
But it is not easy to have because many korean adult think age important in a friendship like me.
>>But it is not easy because many Korean adults think that age is important in friendship like me.
I want to change my thinking but it is not easy too.
>>I want to change my way of thinking but it is not easy to do.

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