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2014-08-12 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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Hello. teacher Nina. Happy tuesday ! I soon did homework that you give me yesterday. 1) If I study, I will pass the exams. 2) If the sun shine, we will walk to the town. 3) If he have a temperature, he will see the doctor. 4) If my friends come, I will be very happy. 5) If she earn a lot of money, she will fly to New York. That's all. Goodbye.

강사 첨삭

Hi there [이름] ^^ Thank you very much for always allotting time to do your homework. I hope that you are learning from them. I\'d like you to go over the corrections I provided for you.You did a magnificent job! Keep it up! Teacher Nina   Hello. teacher Nina. >> CorrectHappy tuesday !>> Correct ( Tuesday^^) I soon did homework that you give me yesterday.>> I did my homework that you gave me yesterday.>> OR: I immediately did my homework. 1) If I study, I will pass the exams. >> Correct2) If the sun shine, we will walk to the town. >> shines, >> Correct3) If he have a temperature, he will see the doctor.>> has >> Correct 4) If my friends come, I will be very happy.>> Correct 5) If she earn a lot of money, she will fly to New York.>> earns, >> Correct That\'s all. Goodbye. >> Correct

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