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2015-04-14 · 첨삭 강사 Bella

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Q :Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? With the help of technology, students nowadays can learn more information and learn it more quickly. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. A : I disagree for students. While they learn with the help of techonlogy, they don't try to find out for themselves. Hi Bella. Yesterday, you answered about my homework. Can I ask you something? I have been working for the parts of car company in Gyeonggi-do Province. >> I have been working with a car company in Gyeonggi-do Province. I have been working with car's components company in Gyeonggi-do Province. Or I have been working with parts of car company in Gyeonggi-do Province. Lesson 2 I live in Gyeonggi-do. I moved there before 10 years ago. Near my house where I live, my company and some school are located. So I moved why. I am living on the first floor in apartment building. It has 3 bedrooms, 2 bathroom, a living room and a kitchen. The bus station located next to my apartment building. Also there are many stores. I like to live there because I don't feel uncomfortable while I live there. Postscrip. Hi Bella. I want to study one lesson for a day because I want to memorize it.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름] -   Thank you for accomplishing our homework again. It is always nice to hear your ideas about different things. For your sentence from yesterday\'s homework - You may also say - I have been working with a company in Gyeonggi-do Province that manufactures car parts. Or - I work at an auto parts company in Gyeonggi-do province. Below are some corrections for our current topic. Have fun!^^ As you wish, we will study one topic everyday. :)   = Teacher Bella =   I live in Gyeonggi-do. >> Correct! I moved there before 10 years ago. >> I moved there 10 years ago. Near my house where I live, my company and some school are located. >> Near the house where I live is my company and some schools in the province. So I moved why. >> That is the resaon why I moved here too. I am living on the first floor in apartment building. >> I am living in the first floor of the apartment. It has 3 bedrooms, 2 bathroom, a living room and a kitchen. >> Correct!The bus station located next to my apartment building. >> The bus station is located next to my apartment. Also there are many stores. >> Correct! >> OR: There are also many stores around. I like to live there because I don\'t feel uncomfortable while I live there.>> I like this place very much because I feel comfort in it. >> OR: I am enjoying my stay here because it makes me comfortable all the time.   I want to study one lesson for a day because I want to memorize it. >> I want to study one lesson in a day because I want to memorize it.

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