homework - 5
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello Ms. [이름],
When I was younger I haven\'t thought of traveling abroad but now that I\'ve tried it, I feel like I must earn to be able to travel to a lot of places. So I understand what you are trying to say. Very good sentences Ms. [이름]! See you!
Take care!
~T. Lynn
While we travel, we need a lot of money.
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OR>> When we travel, we need a lot of money.
When I was young I couldn\'t know about things.
>>correct!
So when I want to travel somewhere, I first save much money for a long time.
>>correct!
OR>> So if I want to travel somewhere, I have to save a lot of money first.
Nowadays many young people go to travel without much money.
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I envy their youth and their bravery.
>>correct!
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