homework - 6
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello Ms. [이름],
I read an article that says Koreans opt to travel abroad rather than have a trip in the country. Well, if you have money why not right? But local tourism will also help your economy so going abroad also has its disadvantage. See you on Monday!
Take care!
~T. Lynn
In my case, I usually visit a big water park with my children because most children go to there like my children.
>>In my case, I usually visit a big water park with my children because most children go there like my children.
However I don\'t like to go there because There are crowded with people but I will go there still in this summer because of my children.
>>However,
I don\'t like to go there because it is crowded with people but I
will still go there this summer because of my children.
Nowadays many Korean people go to abroad so I envy them. ^^
>>Nowadays, many Koreans go abroad so I envy them. ^^
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