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Last months, my family visited in Seoul. My family met my sister-in-law's family to have a dinner. We went out and had a dinner with sushi and many foods. My family and her family couldn't often meet because we were very busy. So we talked about many things Specially, we talked about my father-in-law. He has lived along for a long time. We had to take care of him for his future. We decided that we will save some money together. Also she gave my children the presents. My children looked happy. We spent enjoyable time together.

Hi [이름] - Another wonderful composition coming from you.^^ Thank you for sharing your experiences with me. I appreciate the effort you are showing towards our classes. I will talk to you later. Have a wonderful evening! = Teacher Bella =     Last months, my family visited in Seoul. >> My family visited Seoul last month. >> OR: In the past few months, my family visited Seoul. My family met my sister-in-law\'s family to have a dinner.>> We met my sister in law\'s family for a dinner.   We went out and had a dinner with sushi and many foods. >> We went out and had sushi and many other foods. My family and her family couldn\'t often meet because we were very busy. >> We often see each other because we are all very busy. So we talked about many things. >> Correct! >> OR: We get to talk about many things. Specially, we talked about my father-in-law. >> My father in law became the center of our conversation. He has lived along for a long time. >> He is still very stong and healthy despite his age. We had to take care of him for his future. >> Correct!We decided that we will save some money together. >> Correct!Also she gave my children the presents. >> She also gave my children some presents. My children looked happy. >> Correct!>> OR: My children were very happy. We spent enjoyable time together. >> Correct! >> OR: We enjoyed the time together.