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2016-08-08 · 첨삭 강사 Lynn

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I recommend Hanok Village in Jeonju city. There are many Hanok houses and delicious Korean foods. Hanok house is traditional Korean house. It is very beautiful and I like Hanok. I visited there a few months ago with my family. I wanted to stay Hanok guest house but I couldn't stay there. Because it is very famous and popular place so I could not reserve. I want to visit there again so I want to stay Hanok guest house.

강사 첨삭

Hello Ms. [이름],

Thank you for telling me about the Hanok Village. I will surely visit there if I\'m given the chance to visit your country. You did a great job in this composition Ms. [이름]. As you can see, you have very few corrections. Good job!

Take care!

~T. Lynn

I recommend Hanok Village in Jeonju city.

>>correct!
There are many Hanok houses and delicious Korean foods.

>>correct!
Hanok house is traditional Korean house.

>>correct!
It is very beautiful and I like Hanok.

>>correct!
I visited there a few months ago with my family.

>>correct!
I wanted to stay Hanok guest house but I couldn\'t stay there.

>>I wanted to stay in a Hanok guest house but I couldn\'t stay there.
Because it is very famous and popular place so I could not reserve.

>>Because it is a very famous place, it is fully booked so I could not reserve.

NOTE: Famous and popular are synonym. That is they have the same meaning.
I want to visit there again so I want to stay Hanok guest house.

>>I want to visit there again so I can stay at a Hanok guest house.

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