homework - 8
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi Ms. [이름],
Thank you for giving time to do your homework although you\'re on vacation. As time changes so are people. The problem is people don\'t change for the better but for the worse. What do you think will happen in the future? I don\'t want to think about it. See you!
Take care!
~T. Lynn
A long time ago, a big problem was only stealing.
>>A long time ago, the biggest problem was stealing.
Nowadays a lot of crimes are happening in the world.
>>correct!
For example human trafficking, murder, assault and many more.
>>correct!
So I am very scared to lives also I am afriad.
>>So I am very scared to live in a world like this.
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