homework - 9
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi there Ms. [이름],
I guess, it\'s the same for everybody. Family is number 1 or the priority. I will do the same actually. If today is my last day, I will spend it with my mother eating everything I love. Have a nice day! See you!
Take care!
~T. Lynn
If tomorrow will be my last day to live, I want to stay my family and than I will have delicious food with my family.
>>If tomorrow will be my last day, I want to stay with my family and eat delicious food with them.
And then I will tell them about my faults.
>>correct!
I was open upset to my family, I was open annoyed.
>>I was often upset and annoyed with my family.
Also I will tell them I really, really love them.
>>correct!
I loved my family.
>>correct!
I am loving my family.
>>correct!
I will love my family.
>>correct!
After I died, I still will be love my family.
>>After I die, I will still love my family.
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