homework - December 10th
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
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Jean
1. hold / held
Hold on your study pattern, then it will give you a success.
>> If you make your study habit a part of your routine, it will lead you to success.
The father held his son\'s hand because he had passed his hand to his father.
>> When the son reached for his father\'s hand, the old man held on to it.
>> or: When the son reached for his father\'s hand, the latter held on to it. [more formal]
2. home country
Korea, my home country has been developed at culture industry such as K-Pop
>> Korea, my home country, has a developed popular culture industry such as K-Pop.
3. social issue
Recently, environment problem is one of the the most important social issues.
>> or: Environment problem is one of the most important social issues recently.
4. nuclear family
The member of family have been changed big family to nuclear family in modern society.
>> Families have change from big to nuclear ones in modern society.
5. raise children
All parents should have responsibility that raise their children in a good way.
>> All parents should raise their children in a good way.
>> or: Parents have the responsibility to raise their children in a positive way.
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