homework - December 11th

2018-12-18 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

학생이 쓴 원문

1. don't have an appetite I don't have an appetite because I am very ill. 2. taking medication Taking medication could help release pain 3. fasting It is not normal that Christians have fasting period, but it depend on their own choice. 4. abstain from He has abstained from going outside during the period of exam. 5. a high number of There are high number of communication technologies, which make people's lives comfortable.

강사 첨삭

Hello!^^



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Cheers!
Jean 




1. don\'t have an appetite
I don\'t have an appetite because I am very ill.

>> or: Owing to my illness, I don\'t have an appetite.

 2. taking medication
Taking medication could help release pain
>> Taking medication could help ease the pain.


 3. fasting
It is not normal that Christians have fasting period, but it depend on their own choice.
>> It isn\'t customary for Christians to have a fasting period, but some choose to observe such practice.


 4. abstain from
He has abstained from going outside during the period of exam.
>> Your sentence is grammatical however, we normally use this word when we talk about something that is unhealthy or gives you pleasure, especially something enjoyable that you think might be bad such as smoking, alcohol, sex, food, etc.


 5. a high number of
There are high number of communication technologies, which make people\'s lives comfortable.

>> There is a high number of communication technology, which makes people\'s lives more comfortable.

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