homework - December 17th
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강사 첨삭
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Jean
1. interact / interaction
It is important to interact between teachers and parents to make a good learning environment for children
>> It is important for teachers and parents to interact as this can create an environment that\'s conducive for learning.
Marker economy is managed by the interaction of demand and supply
>> A market economy is a system that is based on the interaction of supply and demand.
2. solo trip
I have never tried to go on a solo trip because I prefer to travel with my family.
>> correct
3. group trip
One of the advantages of a group trip is that can make a good relationship one another during the trip.
>> One of the advantages of a group trip is that it can be an opportunity to form a good relationship with other people.
4. enjoy nature
I like to enjoy nature which has beautiful scenery rather than city tour.
>> I\'d rather enjoy nature which has beautiful sceneries than go on a city tour.
5. thankful for
My wife and I have different personalities each other, so I am thankful for it because it can makes us help each other.
>> My wife and I have opposite personalities, but it\'s actually a blessing in disguise as we can support and help each other.
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