Homework - Essay writing

Title : Do you try to use body language when you communicate in English ? Hello teacher Nina ^^ How are you feeling today ? I'm notthing special today but I will be happy that I take summer vacation from August. 2 to 10(9days) I want to take a trip abroad with my family in this time but I will don't get those oppertnity in this vacation becauses of chilbirth of my wife. It is the best important job in this year. I always use body language when I communicate in English or in korean. the END. Good-bye. see you later.

Hello there [이름]! It\'s a burning Friday! Thanks for writing an essay. I am so happy for you. Yahoo! You can take a rest. Hihihihi! No worries about going on a trip abroad, I am sure that you will have more opportunities to come. Anyway, you did a good job! You shared your ideas in a nice way. Keep on writing. Talk to you later in class. Teacher Nina   Title : Do you try to use body language when you communicate in English ?Hello teacher Nina ^^ >> Correct! How are you feeling today ? >> Correct! >> OR: How are you doing today? I\'m notthing special today >> Nothing special happened today. but I will be happy that I take summer vacation from August. 2 to 10(9days) >> But I will be happy because I will have my summer vacation for ten days, from August 2 to 10. >> OR: But I am happy because I will take a vacation for ten days, from August second to tentth, I want to take a trip abroad with my family in this time but I will don\'t get those oppertnity in this vacation becauses of chilbirth of my wife. >> I want to go on a trip abroad with my family this time. But I won\'t have that opportunity this vacation because my wife just gave birth.It is the best important job in this year. >> Correct! I always use body language when I communicate in English or in korean. >> Correct! ( Capitalization: Korean ^^) the END. >> Correct! Good-bye. >> Correct! see you later. >> Correct!