homework - from Taylor

2014-03-31 · 첨삭 강사 Jeny

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Qustion: Is there any differences in communication style at workplaces between the younger and senior members of the organization? If so, why is it different? Answer: There are two kinds of communication style at workplaces. One is reading communication and the other one is listening communication. Usually senior members prefer listening communication style like face to face and presentation. However(nonetherless) young generation perfer reading communication style for example messenger, e-mail and social network.

강사 첨삭

Hello Taylor,

I hope I was able to help you in any way. I encourage you to practice and express yourself more in terms of answering a certain question. I know that you do have a big potential in enhancing your skills in English, so don\'t lose hope.

It was nice to hear your voice this morning and I\'ll talk to you tomorrow.

Have a great day!!!

T. Jeny

 

Qustion: Is there any differences in communication style at workplaces between the younger and senior members of the organization?

>>Question: Is there any difference with the communication style in the workplace  between the young and senior members of the organization?

 If so, why is it different?

>>correct


Answer:There are two kinds of communication style at workplaces.

>>Answer: There are two kinds of communication styles in the workplace.

>>There are many forms of communications styles in the workplace.

One is reading communication and the other one is listening communication.

>>These are reading and listening communication.

>>One is the reading communication and the other one is listening communication.

Usually senior members prefer listening communication style like face to face and presentation.
>>Senior members usually prefer listening communication style , like face to face and presentation.

>>Senior members usually prefer listening communication style, like face to face and presentation because they can communicate and understand each other properly.

However(nonetherless) young generation perfer reading communication style for example messenger, e-mail and social network.

>>However/ Nonetheless, young generation prefer reading communication style, for example messenger, e-mail and social network.

>>On the other hand/However/ Nonetheless, young generation prefer reading communication style, for example messenger, e-mail and social network, because they can express themselves effectively.

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