HOMEWORK - How can we avoid competition among students in school?
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students in school isn\'t there any way to avoid it
i think somewhat competition. so students make study harder?
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Hello, Eve!~
I agree that it encourages students to work harder on their studies in some ways, but it also puts them under pressure, which can cause depression :( So for me, it is better to study without that kind of atmosphere so we can appreciate more the purpose of life ^__^
Chammy
students in school isn\'t there any way to avoid it
>> I think there is no way for students to avoid competition in school.
OR
>>I don\'t believe there is a way for students to stay out of competition at school.
i think somewhat competition. so students make study harder?
>> I think competition somewhat makes the students study harder.
OR
>>Competition, in my opinion, motivates students to work harder in their studies.
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