Homework - How did you spend you long holiday?
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello there, beautiful ACRINA! :)
Thanks for doing you homework.
It seems you had a lot of fun during the long holiday.
I also don\'t know how to ride a bicycle. :p
I tried once but, I fell and I scraped my knee.
It was painful so I never tried rising a bicycle again.
I will take note of your request.
Enjoy the rest of your Thursday afternoon.
Take care! :)
Happily,
Teacher Jacey ^_^)/
Hello,Jacey :)
>> Hello, Jacey.
This holiday was really long like a short vacation.
>> Correct!
>> OR : This holiday was really long. It was more like a short vacation.
I don`t work these days but I also felt excited during this holiday.
>> Correct!
As I told you today class, I worked at Japanese restaurant for a week from last month.
>> Correct!
So I went to work by May 2nd.
>> Correct!
May 3rd was Buddha\'s Birthday but I believe God and go to mass even it is not every Sunday.
>> May 3rd was Buddha\'s Birthday but I believe in God and I go to mass even if it is not every Sunday.
So it was just a holiday for me! I went to the theater watching \"Guardians of the Galaxy 2\".
>> So it was just a holiday for me! I went to the theater and watched \"Guardians of the Galaxy 2.\"
I really enjoyed it. Especially one of the main character,\"Groot\" was super adorable.
>> I really enjoyed it, especially one of the main characters named \"Groot\", who was super adorable.
I`d like to recommend you to check this out.
>> I\'d like to recommend you to check it out.
On last Friday, I learned how to ride a bicycle.
>> Last Friday, I learned how to ride a bicycle.
It was second try but I still felt nervous a lot.
>> It was my second try but I still felt really nervous.
>> OR : It was my second try but I still felt a lot of nervousness.
It was similar feeling that I learned swimming.
>> It was a similar feeling when I learned swimming.
I learned those sports very late but I proud of myself.
>> I learned those sports very late but I am proud of myself.
I will buy a bicycle for me! :)
>> Correct!
Today class was casual and I like that way.
>> Today\'s class was casual and I like it that way.
I have a request.
>> Correct!
I use my cell phone and the volume is max but today I could not hear you sometimes.
>> I use my cellphone in maximum volume but today I could not hear you sometimes.
so please tell me more loudly during class.
>> So please speak more loudly during class.
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