HOMEWORK - ROLE MODEL

2016-09-13 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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HOMEWORK FOR THE DAY: Composition Writing: What do you look for in a role model and why? When I was young, my role model was famous women. Until these days, they have a lot of advantages for me to learn. But I don’t have a role model recently. I search the blogs on the internet. Some bloggers enjoy their lives by traveling or reading the book steadily. When I see their post, that blogger is my role model at that moment. And I try to have their good point. That inspire me to have other perspective to world. I think that is the role model.

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Hi there ny dear! Happy Tuesday! Thank you so much for  spending some time to do your homework... I can\'t wait to hear your voice again... Take care and have a great day! xoxoTeacher Cam^^ HOMEWORK FOR THE DAY:Composition Writing: What do you look for in a role model and why?When I was young, my role model was famous women. >>correctUntil these days, they have a lot of advantages for me to learn. >>correctBut I don’t have a role model recently. >>correct I search the blogs on the internet. >>correctSome bloggers enjoy their lives by traveling or reading the book steadily. >>correctWhen I see their post, that blogger is my role model at that moment. >>correctAnd I try to have their good point. That inspire me to have other perspective to world. >>correctI think that is the role model. >>correct

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