HOMEWORK - ROLE MODEL
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HOMEWORK FOR THE DAY:
Composition Writing: What do you look for in a role model and why?
When I was young, my role model was famous women.
Until these days, they have a lot of advantages for me to learn.
But I don’t have a role model recently. I search the blogs on the internet.
Some bloggers enjoy their lives by traveling or reading the book steadily.
When I see their post, that blogger is my role model at that moment.
And I try to have their good point. That inspire me to have other perspective to world.
I think that is the role model.
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HOMEWORK FOR THE DAY:Composition Writing: What do you look for in a role model and why?When I was young, my role model was famous women.
>>correctUntil these days, they have a lot of advantages for me to learn.
>>correctBut I don’t have a role model recently.
>>correct
I search the blogs on the internet.
>>correctSome bloggers enjoy their lives by traveling or reading the book steadily.
>>correctWhen I see their post, that blogger is my role model at that moment.
>>correctAnd I try to have their good point. That inspire me to have other perspective to world.
>>correctI think that is the role model.
>>correct
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