Homework - teacher May

2017-12-05 · 첨삭 강사 May

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Homework How do you act when you are happy? Do you like being around happy people? I would drink beer with my friends when I\'m happy. Then I feel happier. Next, we go to the singing room with a happy heart. Finally, We are excited! Joy doubles when shared. I like being around happy people. Once again, Joy doubles when shared. It\'s true.

강사 첨삭

Good morning Molly! I like your answer here.

I feel that too. I know that you really a happy person.

You are fun to talk to and I am sure that your friends

are also happy when they are with you.

~~Teacher May~~
I would drink beer with my friends when I\'m happy.
Then I feel happier.
Next, we go to the singing room with a happy heart.

>> CORRECT SENTENCES
Finally, We are excited!

>> We all feel the enjoyment at the end of the day!
Joy doubles when shared.

>> Joy doubles when being shared.
I like being around happy people.

>> I like being around with the happy people.
Once again, Joy doubles when shared.
>> As I have mentioned, you will feel happier when you share your happiness.
It\'s true.

>> CORRECT

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