Homework - teacher May
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Good morning Molly! I like your answer here.
I feel that too. I know that you really a happy person.
You are fun to talk to and I am sure that your friends
are also happy when they are with you.
~~Teacher May~~
I would drink beer with my friends when I\'m happy.
Then I feel happier.
Next, we go to the singing room with a happy heart.
>> CORRECT SENTENCES
Finally, We are excited!
>> We all feel the enjoyment at the end of the day!
Joy doubles when shared.
>> Joy doubles when being shared.
I like being around happy people.
>> I like being around with the happy people.
Once again, Joy doubles when shared.
>> As I have mentioned, you will feel happier when you share your happiness.
It\'s true.
>> CORRECT
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