Homework - teacher May

2017-12-06 · 첨삭 강사 May

학생이 쓴 원문

Do you remember anything about your personality when a child? Share what you can remember and I’ll tell you mine, too I was very popular while I was in school. I often sang a song when special days of school. So all students liked me. Teachers liked me, too. I felt as if I were an celebrity at that time. Sometimes, I miss that time.

강사 첨삭

Hi Molly! Wow. Your answer is beautiful!

I can say that you were so active when you were a student.

I used to be like that, too.

My personality when I was a child was that I was very competitive.

I wanted to be on top of the class so I joined many academic contests

and other extra curricular activities.

Sometimes, it\'s really good to remember those things. ^^

~~Teacher May~~

I was very popular while I was in school.

>> CORRECT
I often sang a song when special days of school.

So all students liked me.

>> I often sang a song when there were special events at school so all students liked me.
Teachers liked me, too.
I felt as if I were an celebrity at that time.

>> I felt like I was a celebrity at that time.
Sometimes, I miss that time.

>> Sometimes, I miss those things.

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