Homework - teacher May
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Good morning Molly! Thanks for answering your homework.
But I want to tell you that your answer is not what I expected.
The question is \"What in your culture are you most proud about?\".
For example: [이름]chi is the national dish and is eaten with most meals,
or celebrating Chuseok and Seollal.
Culture means set of customs, morals, codes and traditions from a
specific time and place. In Korean, you call it \"munhwa\".
Your answers are actually your hobbies and interests, not culture. ^^
But I corrected your sentence. Please check that out. See you! ^^
~~Teacher May~~
1. Going fishing with my family.
>> I go fishing with my family.
2. Going to see the sunrise on the last day of the year.
>> I see the sunrise every last day of the year.
3. Doing music band concert.
>> I like joining band concerts.
4. I play the keyboard part of the band.
>> I play the piano as my part of the band.
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