Homework - teacher May

2017-12-07 · 첨삭 강사 May

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HOMEWORK: WRITING TASKS Answer the question in at least three sentences. What in your culture are you most proud about? 1. Going fishing with my family. 2. Going to see the sunrise on the last day of the year. 3. Doing music band concert. - I play the keyboard part of the band.

강사 첨삭

Good morning Molly! Thanks for answering your homework.

But I want to tell you that your answer is not what I expected.

The question is \"What in your culture are you most proud about?\".

For example: [이름]chi is the national dish and is eaten with most meals,

or celebrating Chuseok and Seollal.

Culture means  set of customs, morals, codes and traditions from a

specific time and place. In Korean, you call it \"munhwa\".

Your answers are actually your hobbies and interests, not culture. ^^

But I corrected your sentence. Please check that out. See you! ^^

~~Teacher May~~

1. Going fishing with my family.

>> I go fishing with my family.
2. Going to see the sunrise on the last day of the year.

>> I see the sunrise every last day of the year.
3. Doing music band concert.

>> I like joining band concerts. 
4. I play the keyboard part of the band.

>> I play the piano as my part of the band.

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