Homework - teacher May

2017-12-12 · 첨삭 강사 May

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What would you think of life without colors? If there is no color, is this world fun? For example, First, Everything will look like the same thing. Second, There are too many similar things, so there will be a fight between people. Third, If hair color, eye color, and body color are all alike, we will look like monsters. Fourth, You won\'t be able to see the cool fall colors you can see in the fall. Finally, we won\'t watch TV. This world will be very boring. How do we live?

강사 첨삭

Hi Molly! Wow, your answers are very literal and good! I like it and I appreciate how you shared your ideas.

Keep on expanding and expressing your ideas. Have a good sleep tonight! ^^

~~Teacher May~~

If there is no color, is this world fun?

>> If there is no color, will the world be happy?
For example,
First, Everything will look like the same thing.
>> First, everything will look the same.
Second, There are too many similar things, so there will be a fight between people.
>> Second, things will be the same so people will possibly fight with each other.
Third, If hair color, eye color, and body color are all alike, we will look like monsters.
>> Third, if our hair, eyes, and body are all in the same color, we will look like monsters.
Fourth, You won\'t be able to see the cool fall colors you can see in the fall.
>> Fourth, you won\'t be able to see the colorful colors of leaves in the fall season.
Finally, we won\'t watch TV.
>> Lastly, we can\'t watch TV.
This world will be very boring.

>> CORRECT
How do we live?

>> How will we live without colors?

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