Homework - \'The power to change the past \'
학생이 쓴 원문
Well.. if i have the power to change the past, I would probably wanna change my mind.
I was a student who didn\'t study anything.
So I wanna tell me in the past. \'You need to change your mind\'.
If it happens, i would have gone to better college and traveled to the various countries.
It would have made me feel definitely happy.
Ah! But, If it happens, Because I met my girlfriend from my college I wouldn\'t have met my girlfriend.
Um.. I will need to think about using the power to change the past.
Actually, There is another reason to need to think about that.
It is that I have a lot of great friends around me. So I hate to forget them.
I think i wrote down a amazing novel.
I hope that you enjoy reading this.
This is just my imagination. He He
강사 첨삭
If humans could change their past, I think there would be benefits and drawbacks. But, I really hope we can and just like you, I would study harder back when I was in school. HEHEHE!!! Thank you for sharing your composition and yes, I had fun reading it. ^___^
-Chammy
Well.. if i have the power to change the past, I would probably wanna change my mind.
>> Well... if I had the power to change the past, I would probably wanna change my mind.
I was a student who didn\'t study anything.
>>Correct
So I wanna tell me in the past. \'You need to change your mind\'.
>> So, I wanna tell myself in the past, “You need to change your mind”.
If it happens, i would have gone to better college and traveled to the various countries.
>> If it happened, I would have gone to a better college and traveled to various countries.
It would have made me feel definitely happy.
>>Correct
Ah! But, If it happens, Because I met my girlfriend from my college I wouldn\'t have met my girlfriend.
Ah! But, If it happens, Because I met my girlfriend from my college I wouldn\'t have met my girlfriend.
>> Ah! But, if it happened, I wouldn\'t have met my girlfriend. Because I met my girlfriend from my college
Um.. I will need to think about using the power to change the past.
>> Um... I will need to think about using the power to change the past.
Actually, There is another reason to need to think about that.
>>Actually, there is another reason I need to think about that.
It is that I have a lot of great friends around me. So I hate to forget them.
>>Correct
I think i wrote down a amazing novel.
I think i wrote down a amazing novel.
>> I think I wrote down an amazing novel.
I hope that you enjoy reading this.
>>Correct
This is just my imagination. He He
>>Correct
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