Homework - \'The reason that Professional athletes and coaches make different an amount of money\'
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\"Wow.. It\'s so difficult homework.
>>\"Wow… It\'s so difficult homework.
To be honest, I love watching various soccer games over my phone.
>> To be honest, I love watching various soccer games on my phone.
So, I\'m really interested in professional athletes and coaches.
>>Correct
Because I can see a lot of news in the sports category on the internet.
>>Correct
If you look at the sports-related news, you can see what the athletes and
coaches have different role.
>> If you look at the sports-related news, you can see that the athletes and coaches have different roles.
If there is one of the best player in the world of sports, the person can make a lot of money.
>> If there is one of the best players in the world of sports, the person can make a lot of money.
But, some player makes even more money than the player.
>>Correct
We call them \'Star player\'.
>> We call them “Star players”.
Like the world of athletes, The world of coach is the same.
>> Like the world of athletes, the world of coaches is the same.
\'Star coach\' exist as well definitely.
>>” Star Coach” definitely exists as well.
Some coach makes more money than another coach.
>> Some coach makes more money than other coaches.
After hearing this story, can you say \'athletes and coach make the same money\'?
>> After hearing this story, can you say “Athletes and coaches make the same money”?
This story is just my opinion. hehe.
>>Correct
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