HOMEWORK - What is a busy day like for you? How do you handle it?
학생이 쓴 원문
busy day is tired but, i like the busy day.
it\'s suh awaste of time!
now i work at home realaxing for while, but i usually schedules with out a break.
i don\'t know how happy i\'m when i get home finished schdules.
so i\'ll write to do list every day in finished to to everything.
강사 첨삭
Nice one, Eve!
I appreciate how you wrote down your thoughts through this composition. Keep writing to keep on learning ^^
Chammy
busy day is tired but, i like the busy day.
>> A busy day means being tired but I like a busy day.
>> A busy day means being tired but I like a busy day.
OR
>> A busy day is tiring but I like it.
it\'s suh awaste of time!
>> It is such a waste of time. (negative note)
OR
>> I think it is productive. (A positive note is better since you like a busy day)
now i work at home realaxing for while, but i usually schedules with out a break.
>> I work from home and it is relaxing for a while but I usually don\'t take a break from my schedule.
now i work at home realaxing for while, but i usually schedules with out a break.
>> I work from home and it is relaxing for a while but I usually don\'t take a break from my schedule.
i don\'t know how happy i\'m when i get home finished schdules.
>>I don\'t know how happy I am when I get home and finish my schedule.
>>I don\'t know how happy I am when I get home and finish my schedule.
so i\'ll write to do list every day in finished to to everything.
>> So, I write my to-do-list to finish everything.
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