homework - what makes a person feel unsuessful?
학생이 쓴 원문
that sound is profound.
makes a person feel unsucessful is many kinds.
i think if i\'m not happy i\'m not unsecessful than money and honor.
if i\'m not happy, what\'s important about money and honor.
i think the person who know what i like, what does i want to do
and can it is a true sucessful person.
so i\'m going to keep talkong to myself and kind if i want to do.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Eve~
I am not sure if I understood your point right but I made some corrections to better the grammar. I hope it makes sense to your point ^__^
Chammy
that sound is profound.
>> That sounds profound.
>> That sounds profound.
makes a person feel unsucessful is many kinds.
>> There are many reasons to make a person feel unsuccessful.
i think if i\'m not happy i\'m not unsecessful than money and honor.
>> I think if I am unhappy, I am more unsuccessful than with money and honor.
>> I think if I am unhappy, I am more unsuccessful than with money and honor.
if i\'m not happy, what\'s important about money and honor.
>> If I am not happy, what\'s the money and honor for?
>> If I am not happy, what\'s the money and honor for?
i think the person who know what i like, what does i want to do and can it is a true sucessful person.
>>I think someone who knows what he likes or what he wants to do is a truly successful person.
so i\'m going to keep talkong to myself and kind if i want to do.
>> So I am going to keep talking to myself and be kind to discover the things I want to do.
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