Homework - \"Why is greeting important?\"
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I think there are a lot of reasons why greeting is important. First, it can be the most short way that people can get along with other people. Also, while greeting, people can share positive emotions and ask how well the other person\'s doing. Lastly, it can be the sign that shows respect for other person.
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I love your ideas, Liz! Good job on your first homework. Keep it up!-Faith-
I think there are a lot of reasons why greeting is important.>> CORRECT
OR I think there are numerous reasons why greeting is necessary.
First, it can be the most short way that people can get along with other people.
>> First, it can be the shortest way that people can get along with others.
Also, while greeting, people can share positive emotions and ask how well the other person\'s doing.
>> Also, through greeting, people can share positive emotions and ask how well the other person\'s doing.
Lastly, it can be the sign that shows respect for other person.
>> Last, it can be the sign that shows respect for other people.
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