HOMEWORK- 230907

2023-09-07 · 첨삭 강사 Jade

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HOMEWORK Is there a specific international cuisine you\'re fond of? --> There are various international cuisine in Korea. Among them, my favorite food is Italian cuisine. When I meet my friend after work, I usually go to the Italian restaurant nearby my office. We mainly eat rose pasta, pizza, and risotto. Also, most office worker eat Chinese food for lunch and so am I. I think Chinese food is very familiar with our culture. Sometimes, I make a book for Japanese restaurant when I have an important meeting because Japanese restaurants have a classy atmosphere in general. I think the food has a high quality so that they are good places for quiet meetings.

강사 첨삭

Good evening, Annie! You have excellent taste in food! Italian, Chinese, and Japanese cuisines are all wonderful choices. Thanks for this. See you in class tomorrow!
~T. Jade^^
Is there a specific international cuisine you\'re fond of?
There are various international cuisine in Korea.
>> There are various international cuisines in Korea.
>> OR: There is a variety of international cuisines in Korea.
Among them, my favorite food is Italian cuisine. 
>> Correct
When I meet my friend after work, I usually go to the Italian restaurant nearby my office.
>> Correct
We mainly eat rose pasta, pizza, and risotto.
>> Correct
Also, most office worker eat Chinese food for lunch and so am I. 
>> Also, most office workers eat Chinese food for lunch, and so do I.
I think Chinese food is very familiar with our culture.
>> I think Chinese food is very familiar to our culture.
Sometimes, I make a book for Japanese restaurant when I have an important meeting because Japanese restaurants have a classy atmosphere in general. 
>> Sometimes, I book a reservation at a Japanese restaurant when I have an important meeting because Japanese restaurants have a classy atmosphere in general.
I think the food has a high quality so that they are good places for quiet meetings.
>> I think the food is of high quality, so they are good places for quiet meetings.

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