HOMEWORK- FAMOUS PEOPLE'S LIVES IN MEDIA.

2016-09-13 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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Composition Writing:Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Television, newspapers, magazines, and other media pay too much attention to the personal lives of famous people such as public figures and celebrities. Use specific reasons and details to explain your opinion. I agree with the statement that various media pay much attention to the personal lives of famous people. Even news on television report personal lives of famous people every day. They have special part on news. News about gossips for celebrities are on air every day. And a part of them has very specific story with picture as a proof. I think that people are getting to pay attention by listening to those visual material even though they are not interested in that. And some people guess that celebrities gossip that is especially related to their personal lives could use politically. Celebrities’ lives can report to general when big political issue happened.

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Hi there my dear... Happy Tuesday! Thank you so much for doing a great job! Very impressive! Keep up the good work... I will call you again after the holiday... Take care! xoxoTeacher Ca^^ Composition Writing:Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Television, newspapers, magazines, and other media pay too much attention to the personal lives of famous people such as public figures and celebrities. Use specific reasons and details to explain your opinion.I agree with the statement that various media pay much attention to the personal lives of famous people. >>correctEven news on television report personal lives of famous people every day. >>correct They have special part on news.>>correctNews about gossips for celebrities are on air every day. >>correct And a part of them has very specific story with picture as a proof. >>correctI think that people are getting to pay attention by listening to those visual material even though they are not interested in that. >>correctAnd some people guess that celebrities gossip that is especially related to their personal lives could use politically. >>And some people guess that celebrities gossip that is especially related to their personal lives could be used politically.Celebrities’ lives can report to general when big political issue happened. >>correct

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