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1.
I have been exercising every weekday at morning for 2 years.
But just I exercise simply and I don\'t drink a protein shake.
Though my muscles have gained a little more than when I started exercising first time.
So it has become my habit.
I guess I go to the gym with think of nothing.
2.
To exercise makes me have confidence when I can check my weight and muscles of my body.
And I can get rid of stress when I\'m sweating with do the aerobic exercise.
Therefore I think you can start off your good day very well after when you exercised.
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Thank you An!
~Lucy
I have been exercising every weekday at morning for 2 years.
>>I have been exercising every weekday in the morning for 2 years.
But just I exercise simply and I don\'t drink a protein shake.
But just I exercise simply and I don\'t drink a protein shake.
>>But just I exercise simply and I don\'t drink any protein shake.
Though my muscles have gained a little more than when I started exercising first time.
>>Though, my muscles have gained a little more when I started exercising at first.
So it has become my habit.
>>CORRECT!
I guess I go to the gym with think of nothing.
I guess I go to the gym with think of nothing.
>>I guess I go to the gym thinkinh of nothing.
To exercise makes me have confidence when I can check my weight and muscles of my body.
>>To exercise makes me have confidence when I can check my weight and my muscles.
And I can get rid of stress when I\'m sweating with do the aerobic exercise.
>>And I can get rid of stress when I\'m sweating doing aerobic exercise.
Therefore I think you can start off your good day very well after when you exercised.
>>Therefore, I think you can start off your good day very well after you exercised.
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