homework-[이름]
학생이 쓴 원문
- Computer helps when we to research some thing.
- Computer makes our homework easier.
- Computer makes our knowledgeable.
- Computer helps our homework.
- We can do games to leisure.
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강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
It is good that you are getting to practice your writing skills.
This will also help you in your speech and communication improvement.
Keep working hard!
~~ Teacher Sharon
Computer helps when we to research some thing.
>> A computer helps when we research topics.
Computer makes our homework easier.
>> A computer makes doing our homework easier.
Computer makes our knowledgeable.
>> A computer helps to make us knowledgeable.
Computer helps our homework.
>> A computer helps us in doing our homework.
We can do games to leisure.
>> We can also play fun games through the use of the computer.
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