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2017-12-27 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

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If you could become a cartoon character, what would be your name and what kind of powers do you want to have? Answer in 5 sentences or more. When I become to cartoon charachter, I would be Cowaine. Because this name mians scary guy. I want to have flying and attack magic powers. Because I don't like woking ,I want to hit bad person and I want to enjoy speed.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!

I\'m so proud of you.

You can make long sentences now.

Continue doing a good job.

Study the correct sentences I put below.

I\'ll see you in class!

~~ Teacher Sharon

When I become to cartoon charachter, I would be Cowaine.

>> If I could become a cartoon character, I would be Cowaine.

Because this name mians scary guy.

>> The name means a \"scary person.\"
I want to have flying and attack magic powers.

>> I want to fly and have magic powers.
 Because I don\'t like woking ,

>> I don\'t like walking so I just want to fly.

I want to hit bad person and I want to enjoy speed.

>> I want to fight bad people and I want to enjoy speed.

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