homework-[이름]
학생이 쓴 원문
Is it important for children to have a mobile phone? Why or why not? Answer in 5 sentences or more.
I think is it important for children to have a mobile phone. Because when children have to talk to mom in outside, and when children hame to surch something, last one is when children have online homework they can do homework.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
Happy New Year!
It is good to start the year right.
You did a good job in your homework.
Keep practicing your grammar!
~~Teacher Sharon
I think is it important for children to have a mobile phone.
>> Correct
Because when children have to talk to mom in outside,
>> This is for the children to call their mothers when they are outside the house.
and when children hame to surch something
>> This is also true when they have to surf the internet.
last one is when children have online homework they can do homework.
>>The last one is when children need to use the internet for their homework.
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.