Homework (*^0^*)
학생이 쓴 원문
Hm.... we don\'t have homework today? and then I will make essay about my future schedule. untill now I will do my homework and english study and ohers like robot. because recently I didn\'t any study like toelc because of my school adjusment. but, I haver dream to go to new school. so I will resolve whole schedule like robot. also my power english homework too!!! sometime, I can\'t concentrate because relationship with friends and other thinks. but, from this day I am unshakable. because I\'m robot!!!!
강사 첨삭
Do not feel and be like a robot! Enjoy your life since you will only be young once!
we don\'t have homework today?
>> Don\'t we have homework today?
and then I will make essay about my future schedule
>> Then, I will just write about my schedule.
untill now I will do my homework and english study and ohers like robot.
>> For now, I will do my homework, my English lesson, and other things like robots.
because recently I didn\'t any study like toelc because of my school adjustment.
>> This is because recently, I haven\'t been studying. Just like my TOEIC lessons because of my school adjustment.
but, I haver dream to go to new school. so I will resolve whole schedule like robot. also my power english homework too!!!
>> But, I have a dream to go to a new school. So I will resolve the whole problem and do everything like a robot. Also, I have to do my PowerEnglish homework too!!!
sometime, I can\'t concentrate because relationship with friends and other thinks. but, from this day I am unshakable.
>> Sometimes, I can\'t concentrate because of my relationships with friends and other thoughts. From this day though, I will be unshakable.
because I\'m robot!!!!
>> It is because I feel like I am a robot!
>>OR: I will do these like a robot!
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