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I find that it is difference of each position.
>>I found out that it is different in each position.
In the company position, they have to be layoff people in their 40s out for the company.
>> In the company\'s position, they have to layoff people in their 40s out for the company.
But they don\'t want to it.
>>But they don\'t want to do it.
In conclusion, I find they have to compromise with each other.
>>CORRECT!
If they are not satisfied each other, they must accept disadvantages.
>>If they are not satisfied with each other, they must accept each other\'s disadvantages.
And If they are satisfied each other, they will be able to work in company.
>>And if they are satisfied with each other, they will be able to work in the company.
Of course, the government should make new jobs.
>>Of course, the government should offer new jobs.
But the government should make jobs that people in their 40s can work.
>>But the government should make jobs that people in their 40\'s can work.
And the government should take advantage of their experience.
>>CORRECT!
So I think they should make jobs which is easily to work and useful to work.
>>So, I think they should make jobs which is easy and make them as useful workers.
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