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2020-02-18 · 첨삭 강사 Lucy

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1. I find that it is difference of each position. In the company position, they have to be layoff people in their 40s out for the company. But they don\'t want to it. In conclusion, I find they have to compromise with each other. If they are not satisfied each other, they must accept disadvantages. And If they are satisfied each other, they will be able to work in company. 2. Of course, the government should make new jobs. But the government should make jobs that people in their 40s can work. And the government should take advantage of their experience. So I think they should make jobs which is easily to work and useful to work.

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Thank you An!

~Teacher Lucy


I find that it is difference of each position.

>>I found out that it is different in each position.

 In the company position, they have to be layoff people in their 40s out for the company.

>> In the company\'s position, they have to layoff people in their 40s out for the company.

But they don\'t want to it.

>>But they don\'t want to do it.

 In conclusion, I find they have to compromise with each other.

>>CORRECT!

 If they are not satisfied each other, they must accept disadvantages.

>>If they are not satisfied with each other, they must accept each other\'s disadvantages.

And If they are satisfied each other, they will be able to work in company.
>>And if they are satisfied with each other, they will be able to work in the company.
 Of course, the government should make new jobs.

>>Of course, the government should offer new jobs.

 But the government should make jobs that people in their 40s can work.

>>But the government should make jobs that people in their 40\'s can work.

And the government should take advantage of their experience.

>>CORRECT!

So I think they should make jobs which is easily to work and useful to work.

>>So, I think they should make jobs which is easy and make them as useful workers.

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