Homework (*^0^*) hehe
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If I can make a person\'s situation better, I will do it for me because of my lazines. I always worried about my future like school transfer and my adjustment. So, when I sutdy or do my adjustmemt, I often can\'t concentrate of my work due to my worry. If I have power of changing person\'s situation, I want to remove my a secret purpose that disturb my concern.
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Why are you always worried?Enjoy your life!
If I can make a person\'s situation better, I will do it for me and because of my laziness.
>> If I can make a person\'s situation better, I will do it for me and it will just be because of my laziness.
I always worried about my future like school transfer and my adjustment.
>> I always worried about my future. Just like when I transfer to another school and my adjustments.
So, when I sutdy or do my adjustmemt, I often can\'t concentrate of my work due to my worry.
>> So, when I study or do my adjustments, I often can\'t concentrate on my work due to my worry.
If I have power of changing person\'s situation, I want to remove my a secret purpose that disturb my concern.
>> If I have the power of changing a person\'s situation, I want to remove the secret purpose that disturbs me.
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