homework 01.02
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~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
What do governments do to control inflation?
Actually, I feel the economy is difficult.
The reason is that I don\'t know about the economic\'s terms and knowledge.
But, I learned about the economy from news and watching various videos these days.
Compared to the pandemic season and now, recently price have become to high.
The reason is that many countries made their cash supply to prevent a economy recession.
Thanks to this, more money come back together in the government and stabilized the prices.
But, after the pandemic season, the aftereffects came.
During the pandemic season, many countries supplied so much money on the market.
It\'s makes the current price continues to rise.
As from the textbook solution, the government will maybe reduce national taxes and rise more taxes to prevent inflation.
But, many professional of economy said, now case it\'s a different situation.
I knew it, the economy is difficult to me.
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~ T. Camille
~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
What do governments do to control inflation?
Actually, I feel the economy is difficult.
Please answer the question:
What do governments do to control inflation?
Actually, I feel the economy is difficult.
>> Actually, I think economics is difficult.
The reason is that I don\'t know about the economic\'s terms and knowledge.
>> The reason is that I don\'t know about the economics\' terms and I don\'t have enough knowledge about it.
But, I learned about the economy from news and watching various videos these days.
>> CORRECT!
Compared to the pandemic season and now, recently price have become to high.>> Compared to the pandemic season and now, prices recently have become too high.
The reason is that many countries made their cash supply to prevent a economy recession.
>> The reason is that many countries made their cash supply to prevent an economic recession.
Thanks to this, more money come back together in the government and stabilized the prices.
>> Thanks to this, more money comes back together in the government and stabilize the prices.
But, after the pandemic season, the aftereffects came.
>> CORRECT!
During the pandemic season, many countries supplied so much money on the market.>> During the pandemic season, many countries supplied so much money to the market.
It\'s makes the current price continues to rise.
>> It\'s makes the current price continuously rise.
As from the textbook solution, the government will maybe reduce national taxes and rise more taxes to prevent inflation.
>> As from the textbook solution, the government will maybe reduce national taxes and increase other taxes to prevent inflation.
But, many professional of economy said, now case it\'s a different situation.
But, many professional of economy said, now case it\'s a different situation.
>> But, many economists said that the current case is on a different situation.
I knew it, the economy is difficult to me.
>> I knew it, the economics is difficult for me.
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