homework 01.05
학생이 쓴 원문
~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
Where do you see yourself five years from now?
I can\'t imagine myself in five years.
If I can know what I will doing in the future, I want see now.
Most people want their future to be a good life.
I also want to be a good life I want in the future.
I think I have to set my goals and gain experience.
If I don\'t do that anything and stand still, nothing will change and my future will be miserable.
It\'s time to move now.
If I try during the five years, I will face myself in five years.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille
~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
Where do you see yourself five years from now?
I can\'t imagine myself in five years.
Please answer the question:
Where do you see yourself five years from now?
I can\'t imagine myself in five years.
>> CORRECT!
If I can know what I will doing in the future, I want see now.
>> If I can know what I will be doing in the future, I want see it now.
Most people want their future to be a good life.
>> Most people want their future to be a good one.
OR >> Most people want to live a good life in the future.
I also want to be a good life I want in the future.
>> I also want to have a good life in the future.
I think I have to set my goals and gain experience.
>> CORRECT!
If I don\'t do that anything and stand still, nothing will change and my future will be miserable.>> If I don\'t do anything and just stand still, nothing will change and my future will be miserable.
It\'s time to move now.
>> CORRECT!
If I try during the five years, I will face myself in five years.
If I try during the five years, I will face myself in five years.
>> If I try doing something in five years, I will be seeing myself in those years.
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