Homework 01/06 : criticizing other people

Hello Oh!!!

I guess, you need to step back and relax...heheheh...you\'ve been working too hard. but I know you are doing this for your family, that is why, I am proud of you!!!!

Thank you for expressing your thoughts about our topic. I do know that we need not to criticize anyone. We just have to understand and respect them, which is the thing to do.

T. Jeny

Fiend

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First, I am sorry for me not doing my homework yesterday, because i was very busy on my job and there were many things to urgently do.

>>First of all, I am sorry for not doing my homework yesterday, I was very busy with my job. There were many urgent things to do.
I was born and raised in not JUGSAN but KYUNG-SANG province.

>>I was born and raised not in JUGSAN but KYUNG-SANG province.
BTW, I was very sad to hear that you have been living apart from your husband for a long time as many as 9 years.

>>BTW, I was very sad to hear that you have been living apart from your husband for almost 9 years.
Thank for you to tell me about your situation.

>>thank you for telling me about your situation.
Pls don\'t be disappointed and have the courage to work hard, then

>>Please don\'t be disappointed, have the courage to work hard.
Someday you can live with your husband .

>>Someday, you will live with your husband.
and I hope that in sooner day.

>>I hope it will be soon.
God bless you.
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Is it impolite to criticize other people?

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Yes, It is very impolite, I think.

>>Yes, I think, it is very impolite.
Anyone can\'t criticize other people whether it is good or bad criticism.

>>Nobody has the right to criticize other people whether it is a good or bad criticism.
when someone criticize others then he also receive same criticism from others.

>>When someone criticize other people then he will also receive same criticism from others.
Before i criticize, I should first consider other\'s point.

>>Before I criticize, I should consider the other person\'s point of view.
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